I'm on page 82 of my final re-write before a professional edits me. I am so dismayed by my amateurish ways, but also pleased with the changes I made. It isn't even about the "to be" verbs. Those aren't as bothersome to me as some of the structural and content wise errors. Oh, did I fail to mention that its a tough job, this thing we call "evolving"?
Anyway, I dreamt some strange stuff. I get the feeling that something bad is going to happen to someone I love or someone they know. Jen-Jen is in Yosemite with some folks I don't know. This isn't unusual but her husband thinks she is cutting down weeds on the mountain side. She is gold-mining with some friends who came upon an inactive claim. I'm really scared. I dreamt of a white wrecked car on a flatbed truck I also dreamt of a creamy beige-gold Volvo or Audi. There is significance. The third dream, there was a beach I was sitting on in a place I did not know. I was cold, but the waves were so soothing. Then came a gentle rain and I went up to the nearest house for shelter. Inside were tons of young people, but I was given some dry clothes and a cup of coffee. Through that dream, as comforting as it was, I was still thinking about the dream with the white car. It would not leave me in peace. I had to wake up for peace. Odd, huh?
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